Thursday, April 3, 2014

ENGL145 AM - MA, He (Martin) - Week 4 2/2

Lots of people work so hard for a better life because money can makes them feel happy; for example, people can buy whatever they want if they are rich enough. Work occupies almost all of people’s best time, and people just use their time to exchange the money. However, that is not to say people do not need work hard. Some people are keep busy all the time and always under the pressure which has negative sides for their health, also there are many people have no ambition. Basic on food, water, and peace, I think happiness is that people can stay with their family and have a steady life. No one has the right to stop people to pursuit the happiness. However, I think people need to find out a balanced point to figure out this problem. If they can find out, they will feel what the real happiness is.

2 comments:

  1. Enjoy your life!!!

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  2. Hey there ... I have read all your blog entries for the last four weeks and you are doing a great job.
    Just remember that you also need to focus on grammar and sentence structure. You frequently have mistakes and short choppy sentences.
    Keep up the good work.

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